


----------There are several events in the past about remember. May be had both good or things. It depended on attitue's each person that what do you want to memorize,a good thing or not ? but for me I want to keep the picture of my old bedroom, it is worth for my memory.
---------I remember my old well. When I think of it, a smile is always appear on my face. My old there were two beds was connected together. One a blue bed and another pink bed. On the top of bed there was a blue pig dall which my parents gave me in my birthday. Within my bedroom there had a wardrobe and a dressing table, the picture move stars were sticked in front of a mirror. When I looked it, Ifelt suddenly happy. Futhermore, my old bedroom there was a veranda ; a platform were built onto upstairs of house. I often stood that place because it had a good view and it made me relaxed, I could see main streets. Nowadays, I still remember happiness, funny happend in this room.
---------The entire is remember about my old bedroom which I'm loved and very related. How about you ? Do you have a good remember your bedroom?
............the EnD............
---------I remember my old well. When I think of it, a smile is always appear on my face. My old there were two beds was connected together. One a blue bed and another pink bed. On the top of bed there was a blue pig dall which my parents gave me in my birthday. Within my bedroom there had a wardrobe and a dressing table, the picture move stars were sticked in front of a mirror. When I looked it, Ifelt suddenly happy. Futhermore, my old bedroom there was a veranda ; a platform were built onto upstairs of house. I often stood that place because it had a good view and it made me relaxed, I could see main streets. Nowadays, I still remember happiness, funny happend in this room.
---------The entire is remember about my old bedroom which I'm loved and very related. How about you ? Do you have a good remember your bedroom?
............the EnD............
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การเขียนเนื้อหาใช้ศัพท์ที่อ่านง่าย สามารถเข้าใจได้ในเนื้อหา การตกแต่งบล็อกก้อดูดี อ่านแล้วไม่แสบตา มีการถามคนที่อ่านด้วยถึงห้องนอนของพวกเขา ทำดีแล้วนะ
แต่งประโยคได้ดีแล้วน่ะ เนื้อความใช้ได้ แต่น่าจะมีรูปมาประกอบ แล้วทุกอย่างก็จะดูดี
อ่านแล้วเนื้อหาเข้าใจง่ายดีแต่อยากให้มีภาพประกอบในส่วนของเนื้อหาหน่อยจะได้สมบูรณ์
ชอบตอนที่สรุปมากๆ จบด้วยคำถาม มันดูน่าสนใจและแปลกดีด้วย เก่งจังเพื่อนเรา!!!
เขียนบทความได้ดี อ่านแล้วเข้าใจง่าย สามารถนึกถึงภาพได้ แต่ถ้ามีภาพประกอบจะสมบูรณ์กว่านี้ โดยรวมก็ ok แล้วจ๊ะ
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